How can there be one soul who can make our life so much better
Exactly how can this spectacular mortal be the perfect one?
The time I have devoted looking & searching, has paid out
Because I am no longer alone & left out there in the cold.
Finally I have a hand that fills the space in mine.
A home that is occupied with laughter,
And a bed that is no longer bare.
(2011)
Zainab- thank you for sharing this poem and asking me to vote on it. It has a very sweet sentiment and excellent choice of words. A lovely message in simple words and it has always been said that there is beauty in simplicity. And unlike a lot of poetry I have read- this poem makes sense! Maybe you would like to read some of the poetry I have posed on this site? Thanks again for inviting me to read your poem! - Claudia Krizay
Fanastic job. this short poem tell me alot and i enjoy reading the poem.10++
'Beauty of Simplicity'...I agree 110% with Claudia down there. this is a very simple and sublime poem. i like it...
very good poem... especially like 'a hand that fills the space in mine...'
Yet another amazing poem (: I love how all your poems clearly state a subject, yet have subtle emotions hidden throughout. Beautiful word choice too. Soulmates are an intereting thing, something so strong it's hard to define. But you've done it with perfect simplicity (: well done.10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Concise but deep, wonderful creation, love reading it, well done....