Soul of a poem suffocates
With heavy dose of ornaments.
Simple and fluent it's flow
Enhances reader's face's glow.
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The point of your poem is clear- brevity, yet, world words, words, and more words. Also talk, talk, talk, and little walking the talk. We have more NATO (No Action, Talk Only) members, But who listens?
Soul of a poem suffocates With heavy dose of ornaments.....so true. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10
totally agree with you! ! Brevity is a goal to seek for! ! ! well expressed, Ratnakar! ! ! ! ! !
Brilliant piece. It's true and relevant. Thanks. Anjandev Roy.