Sparrow Poem by spiritual seeker

Sparrow

Rating: 5.0


A small sparrow trapped,
In a room flying nowhere-
I sat mesmerised.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 15 July 2012

Maybe this little sparrow could someday be like the “Sparrow on a roof.” I agree with Hans, superb. Says a lot with very few words. I enjoyed much. Deserving of the mark.

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Hans Vr 11 May 2012

Superb haiku. Sometimes we are like the little sparrow. Let us free it andlet it fly

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