Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 146,452 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Sparrows You Wait In Row - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

I know I am far from you
Sparrows you witness dew.
Far village I have come,
Dear sparrows you do hum.

I know you are missing me
I am in town you fly see.
Paddy I have kept you eat
On returning we shall meet.

Sparrows you wait in row
I am deeply stable in show.
Sing you soon God's glory
Sparrow you chirp a story.

Neat is beauty I feel mind
In deep love you all bind.
Kind I am ever towards you
Mist comes in morning dew.

Topic(s) of this poem: birds, life, nature


Comments about Sparrows You Wait In Row by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Valsa George (11/17/2015 9:14:00 PM)


    The One thing we miss most among common birds is the sparrows! Earlier, they could be sighted everywhere, chirping and tweeting around house tops and even verandas! Now they are hardly seen! Enjoyed this song on sparrows! (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/17/2015 8:17:00 AM)


    Great Imagery...Sparrows you wait in row
    I am deeply stable in show.
    Sing you soon God's glory
    Sparrow you chirp a story.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/17/2015 2:47:00 AM)


    A lovely song on lovely birds that chirp at the dawn and sing His glory. What a magnificent poem! .....10 (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/17/2015 2:18:00 AM)


    A lover of the Sparrows. i liked it very much when you wrote. Sparrow you sing God's glory.
    yes you wait for me i will be coming to you soon. very nice rhythmic poem full of imagination and praise of God. thank you dear Poet. tony
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  • Rajnish Manga (11/16/2015 11:24:00 PM)


    Sparrows remind us of the glory of God which reflects itself in countless shades and forms of nature on earth. Thanks for sharing this lovely lyrical poem. A couple of lines to quote:
    Sing you soon God's glory / Sparrow you chirp a story / In deep love you all bind.
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  • Alice Perfect (11/16/2015 11:13:00 PM)


    dear little sparrow
    come don't dread
    I'll give you love and a piece
    of bread
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  • (11/16/2015 11:05:00 PM)


    lovely, I like it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015



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