Square Poem 01 - Dante Poem by rich soos

Square Poem 01 - Dante

Rating: 5.0


Dante

hell is a choice we avoid
is sure fire words still burning
a fire displays playful desire here
choice words playful hurt with love
we still desire with hate and
avoid burning here love and pain


First appearance: PoemHunter.com (2016)

Thursday, December 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
inspired by Kim Barney & Wes Vogler
with appreciation to Lewis Carroll
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 10 December 2016

Hey mister Soos (hereinafter addressed as Rich) I like it. As it happens I have been a Lewis Carroll collector for over fifty years. Diagonal is tricky. Nice.job

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R Soos 10 December 2016

Thank you! =: -) ..

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Kim Barney 08 December 2016

Very clever. A different take on the square poem than mine, where you count words instead of syllables, but your. poem also reads the same down word by word as it does across. Mine don't do that.

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rich soos

Passaic, NJ USA
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