Exhaustion Poem by rich soos

Exhaustion

Rating: 4.6


a persistent and expected guest
seldom speaking aloud within
the soul I once considered rowdy
and devised of the songs of birds

in concert with my guitar strums he sings
the tremulous feathered melody within
I walk heedful of the fluttering
of the tearful translucid wings


from Parting/Departing (2015)

Wednesday, December 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: music,tired
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 22 January 2019

Very fine poem...Congrats...for being pod..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 January 2019

A well thought poem of the day, Rich. Congrats for being picked.....10++++++++++++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 January 2019

The way you have expressed your love for music makes the poem so beautiful. 'I walk heedful of the fluttering of the tearful translucid wings.'...is so nice. Deserved to be POD. Congrats.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2019

A beautiful poem that sings an inbuilt song! many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Tom Allport 22 January 2019

A beautiful write that is soothing music to the ears? .....well penned Rich

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Khairul Ahsan 23 January 2019

Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! 'I walk heedful of the fluttering of the tearful translucid wings' - very nice expression.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 January 2019

Intensity in the expressions about song of a bird is laudable. Congrats on the poem of the Day.

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2019

Congrats for this wonderful poem being featured as POTD. Musical farewell.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2019

guitar knows to cry, knows the pain and sorrow of player the tone and tune want to escape to too far unknown, and unknown crossing the horizon.....///

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 January 2019

Song of the bird, fluttering yet tearful. Hearty Congratulations for this lovely poem.

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rich soos

Passaic, NJ USA
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