Stairway Of Leaves (Haiku) Poem by Denis Mair

Stairway Of Leaves (Haiku)

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Leaves falling slantwise...

If my wishes tread lightly

This stairway might hold

Friday, December 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,ephemeral,wishing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Momentary pleasures are like falling leaves...and there is actually something like a stairway of pleasure in the brain, leading from creature comforts through emotional bonds to cerebral delights. It is a series of dopamine-activated centers...from the brainstem up to the lateral hypothalamus, through the midbrain nuclei, running along the medial forebrain bundle, all the way to the frontal cortex. (See Jaak Panksepp, THE ARCHAEOLOGY OF MIND)

I also wrote a longer poem under this title.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 15 December 2019

Stunning write, so beautifully crafted!

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Bharati Nayak 13 December 2019

The imagery of stairway of leaves is so beautiful, thanks for sharing.

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