Standing On The Beach
We are standing on the beach
Watching the sunset slowly go down
With this slow blowing breeze
and waves rolling across our feet
With you standing so ever close
You in front and me just behind
With our hands so ever inter twined
With your hair blowing in my face
It smelling so ever saccharine
I loosen one hand reach up
And pull your hair aside
Then I lean my head so ever slightly
Towards your sweet smell neck
Then I begin to lightly kiss it
from top to bottom
I can notice the chill bumps
Across your exposed skin
You moan so ever slightly
As to give your approval
You softly curse my head
As to want me to continue
This so ever lightly kissing of the neck
Great imagery in this poem. You made me feel like I was there. Moments like these are perfect! Thanks, Whitney
Splendid write, it made me reminisce the moments I stood on the beach with my beloved wife MILIZA the time we made a vow to love each other. The panoramic recollection makes the poetry very romantic. Thank for sharing, a 10.
Truely amazing...This peom, you can just picture it all in your mind...Makes me smile...
I have often tried to write poetry of the beach, and you have captured it. Splendid job, I say.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful, so loving..a kiss that sends the chills.