When We First Met Poem by Scott Austin

When We First Met

Rating: 5.0


When we first met you use to pinch me and punch me because that’s what little girls do.
You use to tell me that I was stupid and things like that.
As months went by you use to tease me and taunt me because that’s what girls do.
Then one day you began to notice me for me.
You began to tease me in a different way because that’s what teenage girls do.
You began to look at me in a different way
Then we became friends that would talk each and every day
Before you know it we became more than friends
We started dating for years and years
I told you that you were the only one so many times that year
When I asked you to marry me that first time
You said we were way too young.
Another year past by when I asked you again
Again you replied we were still too young.
The day came when I left and went away to join the Army that mid year.
I was deployed so far, far away in that distant land
We continued to communicate the best way we could
This was enough for me to ask you for the third time if we could
You finally broke down and said we should this is what I wanted for the past two years
So I flew home as fast as I could before you were able to change your mind
It finally came true that clear and sunny day back there in December of eighty-three.
Now years have gone by and by we are still together for this is why
You are still my best friend and my lover that is true
We have had some good times and some bad times this is no lie
But you are always there by my side for when it means the most I don’t know why
When I was healthy and when I was sick even when we had money and then we had none
We made this commitment when we were very young you have stuck with me this is true
For this I will always love you forever and forever my only true love until my life is through.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ikazoboh Austine Jeffrey 08 September 2006

wow, there is special or should i say different way you wrote this one. it is good. i like it. Austin

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Patricia Gale 05 October 2006

This is such a beautiful story, Like a love novel. Thank you for sharing.

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Jean Evans 22 March 2007

Mr. Austin, This poem reminds me so much of my husband and I. We have been married for 18 wonderful years and we too were married young(he18 and I 17) , I know alot of people probably thought it wouldn't work but, if it is true love and you know it, nothing can stop that. I have the best life with the best man ever! Wonderful poem, and that's why I gave it a 10! Sincerly, BlueLovesMemories

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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

True love is like that as you depicted in your poetry. What one goes through for the other's affection is so sad sometimes. This work reminds me of a chapter in Leo Tolstoy's War and Peace of Nicolas seeing Princes Mary for the first time, but that she had to wait for his love till he came back from the war.

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Barbara Haskell 13 January 2008

This is so beautiful, Scott. It does my heart good to know that there are couples in the world that stick together and love each other for so long. I'm happy for you and your wife! Barbara

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

You are still my best friend and my lover that is true Rachel Ann Butler

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Anjali Sinha 01 July 2009

'When we first met you use to pinch me and punch me because that’s what little girls do.' hey I did the same---therefore I can connect with you. lovely write anjali (if time permits do read any of my poems)

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Eddie Garcia 03 December 2008

Scott first of all thank you for the cooment on my poem. your poem was written so beautiful with full of emotion. you should be proud of your work and your wife too must be proud of you. i loved it and look forward to reading more of your work.

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Stacey Watts 07 August 2008

Oh my goodness. I love this it brought back so many memories. I met my husband in the 8th grade. It is wonderful to be married to your best friend. Thank you for reminding me.

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V F 23 January 2008

this poem gives such a mushy feeling.... Yes... more than anything else a couple needs to be friends first.... thanks for sharing

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