Star Vanished Poem by sekharan pookkat

Star Vanished

Rating: 5.0


A star in the sky
Offered a man on earth
Heaven and paradise
In world of Love

He flew with his thoughts
And left his valley
Looking for his Madonna
Parlance with clouds

The star in the sky
Vanished from his sight
And left him alone
In the procession of sunlight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anamika Jalan 04 July 2013

so great and inspired write i like your way of writing

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Valsa George 20 August 2013

Some visions are just delusions! But there is no need to be disappointed! Stars will again brighten up the sky! A sweet poem

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Hazel Durham 13 August 2013

We don't always get what we want in this life. Inspired write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2013

Good write...sad and romantic....Thanks for sharing....

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 07 July 2013

Sad story, but this is life. In this moment there is no real love. There is some short friendship, and after both learns the lesson from each other, they separate, or the star disappears, specially if they get married, good by Charlee for the love. Be happy until it last, then say Good By and give your blessing. I see many unhappy partners around me. Long time ago they stayed together for the sake of the children and the neighbors, but in this fast moving time the smart people who do not find everlasting happiness, just divorces.

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Poetheart Morgan 04 July 2013

Dont blame her Poet! ! ! All poet need be alone to be with your muse! ! ! ! Very romantic! ! !

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