Stark Comments

Beautiful write. I love the last stanza most A winters morn alone on a bench in an empty park Stark

the first thing that strick is its schem good one do refine it with diff look like 3 2 1 or 5 3 1 words in each line as m already working on but in vain yo did it well....... grt show

i love the structure of this poem, a well written poem

Nice poem Stevie, but in the third from last verse, should that be barren (you've typed barron) ?

A winters morn alone on a bench in an empty park How is it like? What if not alone? Company matters the most That is a very nice poem. Every part telling a different story. Well done Stevie

Very meaningful and poignant write Stevie - very good.