I desired to behold her face
But she turned away a single pace.
I desired to get close to her
But she would no glimpse spare.
She's refined - a kind so rare
And would me call 'dear sir'.
Unannexed - that I'm aware.
But why?
Why won't she with me share
Her love and beauty - not fair.
Seeing her take the air - unaware,
I would stand a distance to stare:
Comely - I would none compare.
This' my sincere plea:
That she would my heart see.
Thus to make my heart glee.
I relate to this poem too. It's those emotions make that admiration for someone very interesting. Nice work man.
I like you free flow kind of writing, the message of love is indeed explicit in this this, good internal and external rhyme. Good piece.
I love the way this poem flows so well you forget you're reading a poem and just feel for the sufferer.
A nice poetic imagination, Allotery. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
A beautiful poetry, nice flow and rhythm Love truly is magical, the real feelings comes when there is problem..10+
A poem of beauty, keep writing. A kind so rare, unannexed. giving you an opportunity. Great construction.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My friend do not despair One day her true feelings she'll bare Thanks-10