Stealing Glances Poem by Abossey Allotey

Stealing Glances

Rating: 4.8


I desired to behold her face
But she turned away a single pace.
I desired to get close to her
But she would no glimpse spare.
She's refined - a kind so rare
And would me call 'dear sir'.
Unannexed - that I'm aware.
But why?
Why won't she with me share
Her love and beauty - not fair.
Seeing her take the air - unaware,
I would stand a distance to stare:
Comely - I would none compare.

This' my sincere plea:
That she would my heart see.
Thus to make my heart glee.

Sunday, July 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 26 October 2015

My friend do not despair One day her true feelings she'll bare Thanks-10

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Hemendra Singh Deopa 11 August 2015

I relate to this poem too. It's those emotions make that admiration for someone very interesting. Nice work man.

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Dedan Onyango 20 July 2015

I like you free flow kind of writing, the message of love is indeed explicit in this this, good internal and external rhyme. Good piece.

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Stephen Katona 01 November 2017

I love the way this poem flows so well you forget you're reading a poem and just feel for the sufferer.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Allotery. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Allotey Abossey 14 October 2017

Thank you friend. Sure will go through

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Lisa Marie Mottert 02 March 2016

Beautiful poem with a nice rhythmic flow!

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Allotey Abossey 14 October 2017

Thank you.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 13 February 2016

A beautiful poetry, nice flow and rhythm Love truly is magical, the real feelings comes when there is problem..10+

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Howard Savage 06 January 2016

A poem of beauty, keep writing. A kind so rare, unannexed. giving you an opportunity. Great construction.

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