~ Stop Opiumed By Opinions Of Others [so4] ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Stop Opiumed By Opinions Of Others [so4] ~

Rating: 4.5


~ Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others [SO4] ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26 July 26,2010

I’m in my own I
Phew whew scrap trash
Mega bytes of biblios audios visuals
Pouring every millisecond
From all comers luring
Strange and uncalled for
And unforced for!

Why be prey to that?
As I wish I’ll be
Sociable but
Why be Socialite? ~ Lol!

Why elude equate in
Plus minuses of calories
Curves crevices pop outs
Vital stat to satiate others’
My oomph appeal by
Lingerie lulu ~ sucks up ~ lololuuud?

Socialites personages
Of Page Three
Party animals nocturnals
Stay boozed binged in
Satiating their un-fillable bulimia
For libido lucre gloss glitter!

I’m no petite Page Three
But nonpareil Page A~One
I’m happy with e’er full
Innate richness of my
Ace alto audio of abode ~
Stop Opiumed by Opinions Of Others.

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Glossary with humility I’m giving what I tried to express:
Alto ~ The pitch range of the lowest female voice

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 November 2010

Once again you are unique in your presentation. I liked the poem very much.

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Ramesh T A 04 September 2010

I am 100% your side in this matter!

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Lynn Glover 08 August 2010

A good poem Niv, I enjoyed the read. Some portions I didn't understand, but after a couple of reads it came to me. Good work.

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Gregory Pierre-jerome 05 August 2010

PROVERBS 8 17I love them that love me; and those that seek me early shall find me. 18Riches and honour are with me; yea, durable riches and righteousness. 19My fruit is better than gold, yea, than fine gold; and my revenue than choice silver. 20I lead in the way of righteousness, in the midst of the paths of judgment: 21That I may cause those that love me to inherit substance; and I will fill their treasures. 22The LORD possessed me in the beginning of his way, before his works of old.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 05 August 2010

I'M IN MY OWN I I'M IN MY OWN I I'M IN MY OWN I Very hard to keep this strength forever. But who can, is genius. All your realizations, one kind of confession to one and strict self. Perhaps its the darks of the time to fight a poet for. Try to achieve the goal. Our wishes with you. Well-written with megabytes of anti waves and lingerie. In another sense the total poetry has been an ideal writing of socialite literature and standing against the sociable life of existing time. Good craft undoubtedly and inspiring writing style of the time. Regards, 10+++ pranab

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Bachha Chakravorty 18 April 2012

Bubbling effervescent sparkling self confidence I agree with Gloss Glitter very aptly commented The salivating call of Glossy Life....indeed to shun...Poet clearly showed the happiness in '...But nonpareil Page A~One...' Thanks for sharing Ten+

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Flamboyant and Undaunted Self Confidence...very nicely crafted Poet Ms. Nivedita is much conscious of gender- bias and she accordingly spoke... Women's lib doesn't mean 'want it and have it by any and all menace' as happens in High Society...better to be down to earth with one's own identity Thanks for sharing 10++

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Flamboyant and Undaunted Self Confidence...very nicely crafted Poet Ms. Nivedita is much conscious of gender- bias and she accordingly spoke... Women's lib doesn't mean 'want it and have it by any and all menace' as happens in High Society...better to be down to earth with one's own identity Thanks for sharing 10++

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Amitabha Bagchi 12 April 2012

Simply amazing... 'glossy-life' many salivate for...here poet clearly turned down the calorie to zero....indeed...party animals are lookin' for stale overused cliched life...only to aggravate one's orgy alas its never satisfied...dooms into bloom thanks for sharing 10++

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Amitabha Bagchi 12 April 2012

Simply amazing... 'glossy-life'...many salivate for...here poet clearly turned down the calorie to zero....indeed...party animals are lookin' for stale overused cliched life...only to aggravate one's orgy alas its never satisfied...dooms into gloom thanks for sharing 10++

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