Friday, June 23, 2017

Strength Within Comments

Rating: 4.5

as love may come and go like spring
like luck or fortune's furtive grace
so every heart must guard itself
and thus reserve a secret place
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 18 July 2017

and in that secret place the soul behind a wall where no one goes must hide itself from pain and fear and all delusions we suppose: the verses impressed me most

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Jaya Das 23 June 2017

yes...its true we are alone in this world therefore we have to hold the strength within...great poem...

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Barry Middleton 23 June 2017

Thanks very much for reading and commenting Jaya.

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Michael Hopkins 23 June 2017

Yes, very true and well written poem.

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Barry Middleton 23 June 2017

Thank you Michael, I'm glad you liked it. And thank you for the compliment.

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