Striving Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Striving

Rating: 5.0


There is no end to the sea
Of pain that grips my heart
Above the gathering clouds
Threatens a day of storm

I am at the middle with a
Broken boat seeping slowly
The tide play with it like a
Toy with screws gone loose

Shores are away, invisible
I need the bed of sands to
Lie and dream a beautiful
Life with you by my side

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 March 2023

So beautifully conveyed -the emotion of love and longing, dear Anil ji. Excellent poem romance and beauty. Top score +++

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Nosheen Irfan 19 March 2023

Marvelous! Great romantic poem with sterling imagery.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 March 2023

this is very beautifully romantjc Bravo

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 March 2023

Wonderful write Anil x Thanks for sharing.

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