Suicidal Mind Poem by Spiritwind Wood

Suicidal Mind

Rating: 4.8


This world crumbles before me
the days turn dark and cold
something inside my soul
eating away my flesh
torn and frayed
it's such a mess
nothing here left to hold
In this suicidal mind
where only demons you will find

Tortured by the pain
can't escape your misery
I tried to refrain
these games we played
hear the sound of silence
sealed with a kiss
memories I can't let go
that leave me like this

Haunted by your presence
I think of days of old
with blood in my eyes
lost in a endless day
hiding from myself
facing reality with your lies
In this suicidal mind
where only demons you will find

Now as the sun filled skies
turns dim and gray
with words of angony
every heartbeat dies
with every fallen ones cries
(spiritwind-2000)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
moon dust 26 November 2009

I certainly know these feelings.

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Patrick McFarland 30 September 2009

This is well written, but I got the sense you were holding back some of the rage and pain for the sake of structure. Just my opinion. Still, very well done.

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