Suicide Poem by Paul Butters

Suicide

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If I should ever say I might commit suicide
Then take me to a shrink
Straight away.
For I will have done a mental U-turn,
A complete reversal
Of my current mind-set
Which I've always had.

It is highly likely that when we die
There is nothing
Zilch
Finito.
World's End for us.

I hope I'm wrong
As I've said before.
That's there's Heaven
Or Reincarnation
Or Something.
Immortality sells well.
Most religions offer
An Afterlife.

So Life is Precious
And all too short
For me.
Not to be sniffed at
For sure.
To be made the most of
And extended
For as long as possible.

Suicide bombers are the worst
Of course -
Killing others too
In a fit of Madness.

No, instead of suicide
I yearn for golden dawns and sunsets,
For trees on mountains,
Endless seas,
In our Eternal, Infinite Multiverse,
Blue sky or stars above,
Bathed by the radiant sun
Or cool Moon.

If you think of suicide,
Talk to us instead.

Saturday, December 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: existence,religion,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Butters 19 December 2015

Thanks Brian for your swift and thorough response. Yes I do hope to provoke some positive thinking about life.

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Brian Mayo 19 December 2015

Brilliantly expressed. About some things, it seems we think alike. I admire your poem for it's clarity and natural progression. It uses idioms, cliché, and original poetic thoughts and phrases- -all seamlessly blended into an interesting and thought-provoking poem.

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