Summers Day Stroll Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Summers Day Stroll

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She wore a simple summer dress
Her arms and legs were brown and bare
What stole my heart I must confess,
the red/gold beauty of her hair.
Which rippled like a waterfall
caressed by every passing breeze.
Formed round her head an aureole
a sight that could not fail to please.
A poet with an artist’s eye
for that is what I claim to be
I did but see her passing by
but I remember vividly.
She looked so young and innocent
I looked my fill and was content

I do not think that she saw me
but if she did she would have seen.
An old man strolling aimlessly
An old grey haired worn out has been.
She looked at me unseeingly.
Much too engrossed or so it seemed
to spare a single glance for me.
I formed no part of what she dreamed.
She was still young and so naïve.
She thinks that youthful dreams come true.
But I am old and don’t believe
I know they very seldom do.
So I continued on my way
and left her wrapt in reverie
This pretty girl had made my day.
Albeit quite unknowingly.
Although I’m old I still recall
when dreaming mattered most of all.

10-May-08

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 11 May 2008

Ivor, rhyming 'waterfall' with 'aureole, is an absolute gem. This is a wonderful flowing piece. The music is catchy and the use of langague is fantastic. Leaving me with little more to say except thank you!

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Thad Wilk 10 May 2008

A splendid poem Ivor! ! You are the MAN! Great read! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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C.R. Clark 10 May 2008

Oh, I do like this one, Ivor. Maybe because I can relate to it so well. Even though we now may be seen as 'old and harmless' we still remember when we were 'young and dangerous.' And of course, we always appreciate beauty whether it's a young lady or a beautiful poem, such as this one. Excellent. Thank you. Richard

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