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Summers Gentletouch. [nature] - Poem by alan brown

The Sunlight flickered in her auburn hair
as she walked upon the wandering sands
Like a mirage drifting upon a sea of gold
Her beauty surpassed
All that she met in her path

Shimmering light lit her smile
giving birth too the world.
That Mother nature longed for evenly
between the seasons.
As she approached her destiny.

Flowers bloomed
As her wanton hand
waved delight over the land.
As trees reached for the sky breaking leaf.
In the order of the world
set by our seasons.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Summers Gentletouch. [nature] by alan brown

  • (5/3/2018 11:57:00 AM)

    Thank you Jazib for your wonderful comments (Report)Reply

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (5/3/2018 11:17:00 AM)

    A refined poetic imagination, Alan B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/29/2018 4:36:00 PM)

    The sunlight flickered is definitely very bright and motivational light. Shimmering light has lit her smile. Nature has become graceful. Flowers have bloomed and beauty is surpassed. This poem has rich imagery and brilliantly penned...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Carl Roussell (4/27/2018 7:50:00 AM)

    My favourite line, As trees reached for the sky breaking leaf - you can see the trees growing. Nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/24/2018 9:23:00 PM)

    Enjoyed your poem that touches nature so gently. Correct too second stanza. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 24, 2018



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