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The Sound Of The Morning, [ Nature] - Poem by alan brown

The sound of the morning
whispered clearly in my ear
as the nightingale sang it's melodic song.

Flickering Butterflies drifted from bloom to bloom
taking joy in the abundance of nectar
dripping from within.

Bee's buzzed
bouncing along
as they carried bursting drums of pollen
to a queen so pure.

Ant's scurried within the cracks of walls
busying as the day went on.
Flowers opened,
brightly showing off their splendor
to the wonders of the world.

Dark clouds formed
as flies took to the air
fearless in their plight
as birds fed.

Fields of sweet green grass
rippled in the wind
like waves upon a wanting sea.

Trees showed off their splendor
high above the mortal plain
as orchards gave off their sweet bouquet.

Wheels travelled along the broken road
as carts built high with hay
lazily moved along.

As Ploughs dug deep turning soil,
as they replenished the age old land
Giving birth to a new day.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Free Verse


Comments about The Sound Of The Morning, [ Nature] by alan brown

  • Paul Reed (5/18/2018 3:05:00 AM)

    This is a great and reassuring image you build of a wonderful morning when all the ordinary and sometimes unnoticed things are noticed. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/29/2018 4:34:00 PM)

    Clear whispering of morning we hear from a great imagery drawn in this poem. Outstanding expression of this poem motivates mind of a reader. Sweet green grass ripples with wind. New light gives birth to a new day with hope, love peace and joy. A great poem is shared here...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (4/28/2018 12:57:00 PM)

    Outstanding write this is just a masterpiece about nature and rural life in all it's splendour, this is one of my favourite poems! (Report)Reply

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  • Bipasha D (4/25/2018 10:20:00 AM)

    I love nature poems and this one is fascinating. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek (4/24/2018 10:03:00 PM)

    So sweet, Alan. You are totally absorbed in the virgin nature with nice details. Nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/23/2018 5:20:00 PM)

    The birth of a Nature poet (Report)Reply

    (4/23/2018 5:34:00 PM)

    very happy you read my poems

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  • Carl Roussell (4/23/2018 4:31:00 AM)

    Really nice description as I watched the sunrise today. Thanks for posting. (Report)Reply

    (4/23/2018 5:30:00 PM)

    Thank you Carl

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  • Practicing Poetess (4/22/2018 9:30:00 PM)

    What a lovely, descriptive poem, Alan- - Well done!
    Very much enjoyed.
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    (4/23/2018 5:35:00 PM)

    Happy you enjoyed my poem

    (4/23/2018 5:32:00 PM)

    Thank you Alan

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  • Savita Tyagi (4/22/2018 8:04:00 PM)

    Lovely Nature poems. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

    (4/23/2018 5:37:00 PM)

    I enjoy writing about nature thank you Alan

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 22, 2018



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