M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Sun And Moon - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Sun you are reality and Moon you are dream
You burn my skin and you soothe my soul
You tauten days and you lighten nights
I see worries and In you I find solace

I need both Sun and Moon
Without you Sun I won’t get energy to enjoy life
Without you moon I would slog day and night
You both are integral part.

Sun you make me tough and courageous
Moon you prepare me for another day soothing my tensions
Sun you helps me enjoy luxury of moon
Moon you blossom my inner source to counter sun’s test.

Sun I see my shadow when you beat
Moon I see my reflection in eyes I meet

Topic(s) of this poem: moon, sun

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Sun And Moon by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/7/2016 11:21:00 AM)

    Brillaint
    A brilliant comparison, Asimji 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Salman Sayeed (4/18/2016 12:38:00 AM)


    Comparative between sun and moon its vary beautiful
    Thanks for aharing
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  • (11/27/2015 1:21:00 AM)


    A worth reading comparison..Man (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/2/2015 11:43:00 PM)


    A comparative poem,
    A good distinction between the sun and moon,
    I invite you to read my poem Voice Of An Unaccomplished Soul (on poet's Page)
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/2/2015 8:52:00 PM)


    A captivating comparision among sun and moon. So nicely drafted and aptly presented. Many thanks dear Nehal, may God increase your poetic thoughts.........10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015



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