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Sun Loungers

Rating: 4.4

Still they lie side by side
Waiting for their winter storage
Many wonderful times have been had
Early morning tea contemplating the day ahead
Afternoons sharing dreams and wine
Evenings watching the sun disappear
Nights watching the dancing flames
Now lonely and deserted, dreams perished
Never to lay together again

Tuesday, November 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,thoughts,life
Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Nights watching the dancing flames Now lonely and deserted, dreams perished Never to lay together again beautiful wrote beautiful 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Julia Luber 21 June 2019

I am reading this poem again for the fourth or fifth time and struck by something new- again. That sense of lounging in the sun, as the title of the poem establishes, instead of being filled with the warmth of the sun- the perturbing irony of it becoming a poem about loneliness. I imagine each time I read this poem anew I will notice something else!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2019

Nights watching the dancing flames/Now lonely and deserted, dreams perished....These two lines are my favorite lines! This is indeed a sweet poem! I predict this fabulous poem will find its readers in due course! Excellent work Jennifer!

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Jane Campion 11 June 2019

Life is full and peaceful until taken away. A poem that shows us the universal equation. I liked the depth in this poem dear Jennifer. Many thanks for your kind words.

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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2019

Heartfelt story told in eloquent finesse. A beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer. Remain enriched.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 April 2019

sadly but well composed poetry

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C F 26 March 2019

Such a sad sad image evoked by your poem. Very very well written.10+ I agree with the previous commenter, your poem invites the reader to read again and again.

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Julia Luber 23 March 2019

I'm always struck by the loneliness when I read this, now for the second or third time.

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Jennifer Birchall 25 March 2019

Dear Julia I want to thank you for taking the time to read my poems, I appreciate your insightful comments. Take care, Jenny.

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poetic, artistic and subtle potrayal of deep laid emotions..TOUCHING...nice read Jennifer.

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Julia Luber 16 February 2019

sad about loneliness after sharing intimacy

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