! ! ! Sunk! ! ! Poem by Rehan Hyder

! ! ! Sunk! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Anxious about this artery long absence

Return! ! ! For blood has thickened to a halt

Ink has formed glaciers

Thoughts rent asunder and sink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 17 September 2008

Very dramatic short poem. Well done.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

Small and cute poem, nicely composed.

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Gaitty Ara 15 September 2008

it is not because you left few comments on my page.. it is because i really like these lines... hope to read more of your words

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David Desantis 08 September 2008

artery long absence...thats quite original

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Emancipation Planz 04 September 2008

Okay... I have debunked... Hello Rehan! ! :))

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