Sure Render Or Surrender, Sur Rendezvous Or Sir Rendez Vous Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Sure Render Or Surrender, Sur Rendezvous Or Sir Rendez Vous

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My one half celebrates our meeting's near
And yet my other fears the tears of fear.
Undoubting, one lives US as heaven's writ,
Deterred the other by too perfect fit,
Each part completes the other's inner whole,
Completely each defeats void's empty hole,
Made one by destined synchronicity,
Maid Man ban 'ran', scan fans complicity
As natural for flowing through twinned soul
Unsure, yet too aware two can't be sole.
Dance catalyzed by chance shows love's pure state
Enhanced by 'wait', scorns concommitant weight.
Contradictions sweet sound beat for rhyme,
Make light of distance, down beat jealous Time.


[c] Jonathan Robin acrostic sonnet written 16 June 2008

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