Surrender Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Surrender



Finally
It's over
The self-deception
The tree knows the wind can break
Its courage. Its resistance can last
Only as long as the wind lacks
The urge to kill. It's over
Love knows it's weak
It must flee the battlefield.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 January 2024

Wonderful poem Noshy Thanks for sharing and Bravo! ! ! ! Happy New Year! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 01 January 2024

This is absolutely perfect...... thanks for sharing....

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Sandra Feldman 20 May 2023

So bravely and poetically beautiful. Loved the strong and far reaching tone of this poem.

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David Wood 20 May 2023

Excellent imagery Nosheen. All that's left is hurt, but in time that will heal. Even a damaged tree will sprout new leaves in time.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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