Taj Mahal Re Baraf Poem by Bharati Nayak

Taj Mahal Re Baraf

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Ethara, Ete sheeta

Madi basichhi!

Saaradesatahemal

chariadebhaya, atanka au bhibatsata ra shirshir

samparkasabu thanda, thanda

dehare phata, manare phata

niswasa rephata, prema pranayare phata

Ethara kuade TajMahal re baraf padichhi!

ketepradusan ra samnakaritisthi thiba

Taj Mahal bi baraf re dhanki hoi jaichhi!

Ojan stararechhidra,

Biswasare chhidra

Kebala bisamayabibhisika!

keniamalre bisphorana,

Masjid re bisphorana

Dhulisaat hebapare

Church, Mandirasabueka kara!


bichhidi jaithiba

khandakhanda sharirara

bari heunahin

keunmangsa khanda, keundharma ra!

Sambadapatraraprushthapareprushtha

Auchabis ghantia

duradarshana pardare

khalihatya, aatankaodharsanara

chitramala mala!

chadheirageeta, megha nupurararaagini

aau, phulara gandha

baaruda dhuaanre luchi galeni!

emiti atala tala, andharasamudra bhitare

biswasaramukta tie

samukapetare srustineuthae

aau lakhyeandhari rasta

parihebakusahasuthae!


ତାଜ ମହଲରେ ବରଫ

ଏଥର ଏତେଶୀତ

ମାଡିବସିଛି!

ସାରା ଦେଶଟା ହେମାଳ

ଚାରିଆଡେ ଭୟ, ଆତଙ୍କ ଆଉବିଭତ୍ସତାରଶିରଶିର

ସମ୍ପର୍କସବୁ ଥଣ୍ଡା ଥଣ୍ଡା

ଦେହରେଫାଟ, ମନରେ ଫାଟ

ନିଶ୍ୱାସ ରେ ଫାଟ, ପ୍ରେମପ୍ରଣୟରେ ଫାଟ

ଏଥର କୁଆଡେତାଜମହଲରେବରଫପଡିଛି! ! !

କେତେପ୍ରଦୂଷଣ ର ସାମ୍ନା କରି ତିଷ୍ଠିଥିବାତାଜ ମହଲବି

ବରଫ ରେଢାଙ୍କି ହୋଇଯାଇଛି

ଓଜନ ସ୍ତରରେ ଛିଦ୍ର,

ବିଶ୍ୱାସ ରେଛିଦ୍ର,

କେବଳଵିଷମୟବିଭୀଷିକା!

କେନିଆମଲରେବିସ୍ଫୋରଣ

ମସଜିଦରେବିସ୍ଫୋରଣ

ଧୂଳିସାତହେବାପରେ

ଚର୍ଚ୍ଚ ମନ୍ଦିରସବୁ ଏକାକାର!

ବିଛୁଡିଯାଇଥିବାଖଣ୍ଡଖଣ୍ଡଶରୀର ର

ବାରି ହେଉ ନାହିଁ,

କେଉଁମାଂସଖଣ୍ଡକେଉଁ ଧର୍ମର!

ସମ୍ବାଦ ପତ୍ରରପୃଷ୍ଠା ପରେପୃଷ୍ଠା

ଆଉଚବିଶ ଘଣ୍ଟିଆ ଦୂରଦର୍ଶନପରଦାରେ

ଖାଲି ହତ୍ୟା, ଆତଙ୍କ ଓ ଧର୍ଷଣ ର ଚିତ୍ର ମାଳମାଳ!

ଚଢେଇରଗୀତ, ମେଘ ନୁପୁର ର ରାଗିଣୀ

ଆଉ ଫୁଲର ଗନ୍ଧ

ବାରୂଦ ଧୂଆଁରେଲୁଚିଗଲେଣି!

ଏମିତିଅତଳତଳ ଅନ୍ଧାରସମୁଦ୍ରଭିତରେ

ବିଶ୍ୱାସର ମୁକ୍ତାଟିଏ, ଶାମୁକାପେଟରେ ସୃଷ୍ଟିନେଉଥାଏ

ଆଉ ଲକ୍ଷେଅନ୍ଧାରୀ ରାସ୍ତା ପରିହେବାକୁ ସାହାସୁଥାଏ!

Tuesday, October 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is in Odialanguageand it was published in an Odia magazine 'Barna Bitana' in its April'2014edition.
The meaning of the title of the poem is 'Snow fall on Taj Mahal'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2018

Coldness of autumn before winter has brought up snow fall and this snowfall has covered Taj Mahal with snow. A brilliantly perceived poem of love and fear is excellently presented here. We congratulate you for its first publication in an Odia magazine named, Barna Bitana....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2019

ଓଜନ ସ୍ତରରେ ଛିଦ୍ର, ବିଶ୍ୱାସ ରେଛିଦ୍ର, କେବଳଵିଷମୟବିଭୀଷିକା! କେନିଆମଲରେବିସ୍ଫୋରଣ ମସଜିଦରେବିସ୍ଫୋରଣ ଧୂଳିସାତହେବାପରେ ଚର୍ଚ୍ଚ ମନ୍ଦିରସବୁ ଏକାକାର! .......oh, what a touching expression. You have so brilliantly and touchingly delineated this poem for which I have to visit for second time,

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Bharati Nayak 11 August 2019

Thank you Sir, Kumarmani Mahakul for such great comments on my poem.I feel so inspired.

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Bharati Nayak 01 August 2019

Thank you Jez Brul for showing interest on my poems.The name of Taj Mahal is enough to attract any vistor. Taj Mahal, the majestic mausoleum is viewed more as a monument of love besides its architectural beauty and has become a major tourist attraction. The year I wrote this poem, there was snow fall on Taj Mahal and my poem surrounds on the feelings of cracked relationships as well as violence in the society and environmental pollution.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2018

Snow is falling on Taj Mhal, many new theories about it are heard and read but nobody could deny its beauty.

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Bharati Nayak 30 October 2018

Many many thanks Akhtar Jawadji for your lovely comment.I agree with you.Snow can not cover the beauty of Taj Mahal, the monument of love.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

Never thought this way that some day Taj Mahal will be covered under ice, Barf ke peeche se Taj Mahal kaise machlega bahar aane ke liye..Wow Taj Mahal bi baraf re dhanki hoi jaichhi! I can understand it Khoob Shunder, Khoob Bhalo.++++++

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Bharati Nayak 30 October 2018

Woah- - It gives much pleasure to know that even if there is a language barrier, you still understand it.That is poetic perception.Yes how desperate will become TajMahal to come out of snow (Barf ke peeche se Taj Mahal kaise machlega bahar aane ke liye) .Taj Mahal is the symbol of love and surely seek to come out of the cold.Thank you for reading my poems and your beautiful comment.

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Daniel Brick 16 October 2018

I may niot be able to red this poem but I'm very happy you wrote in your native language. The image iod snow on the Taj Mahal is striking..

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Bharati Nayak 18 October 2018

Thank you Daniel Brick for showing interest to read my Odia poem.As I said in my poet's note, the poem was published in 2014.It was in that year there was a news in the paper about snowfall on Taj Mahal.There was also news of much violence worldwide, terrorists attack at Kenya Mall and the like.My poem had its origin from this scenario.

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