Taking A Dip In The Cold Water Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Taking A Dip In The Cold Water

Rating: 4.8

The cold wave blows from
The hills and makes me shiver
I take out my coat and in a
Hurry run down to the river

There I take a dip in cold
Water and shiver a little more
I come out and lay down
On the sands as the wind roars

I wait for the sun to come
Out and spray its warming ray
Oh! The cold is too much
I don't know how to pass my day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 08 September 2023

Brings many smiles! .. Endless 10'S! .. And More 10'S+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 08 September 2023

A Wonderfully wonderous write! .. Awesomely expressed with very vivid imagery that makes me too shiver! ..

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Is it wise to have a dip in thr cillinh river?

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Kingsley Egbukole 09 September 2023

The cold waves and the sun rays. The power of nature. Nice poem

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Anjandev Roy 09 September 2023

Fine piece........ lovely expression.... thank u..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 September 2023

Anil I feel the same way TFS

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2023

Sometimes we don't know how to deal with life's challenges brought about by nature. An interesting write well expressed.

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