Tale Of My Pen Poem by Kirti Sharma

Tale Of My Pen

Rating: 4.7


I sit to pen down my thoughts,
the cries, while smile, of my soul.
The sorrow it carries inside,
All the pains and regrets and the hard times.
Suddenly, my pen stops working..
had lived a full life,
coming to its end,
now it says good bye.
The same tale tells my mind,
finish this thought and move on,
and I close my book,
thinking that everything is over,
its time for me to sleep forever.

Thursday, May 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 31 May 2014

It seems your pen speaks well, keep on moving it, I mean writing Ha Ha

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Akhtar Jawad 02 June 2014

No, Kirti, you should keep writing. You write lovely poems.

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Ryan Duffy 31 May 2014

A tale of life & death interpreted in only 13 lines with a deluge of emotion!

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Saurav Singh 31 May 2014

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 May 2014

Good morning poet Kirti. This was a good poem with a sad, dramatic ending. Thank you for reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem. Loyd

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Dr. Antony Theodore 21 January 2021

I sit to pen down my thoughts, the cries, while smile, of my soul. The sorrow it carries inside, All the pains and regrets and the hard times. a wonderful poem. tony

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 May 2016

The same tale tells my mind, finish this thought and move on, and I close my book, thinking that everything is over, its time for me to sleep forever. Nice poem dear poetess. Would love to read all of them. Thanks for sharing it. A 10 for it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 November 2015

hallo it is not the time to sleep forever. dont end the poem like that. a fine morning with its golden rays waits for you. hope and joy shall remain in you. that is my wish. thank you. tony

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Beautiful poem Kirti. Its not the time to sleep forever. Its the time to sleep only to wake up in morning. Beautiful write. Keep writing. Loved reading it.

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Nicole Pellerino 14 June 2014

Beautiful.... you have a talent. keep on writing

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