Tales Of The Old Town (Part 01) ... [original Version] Comments
Now listen, friends, and I will tell
Of things you may have never heard.
But very soon you'll know them well.
Oh, please don't think they're all absurd.
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A well executed ballad filled with memories of the past. An interesting poem. Enjoyed it.10
We are listening to you and please you tell this story of memory. Amazing gossip we listen too from your past memory. Life consumed with worry and having doubts provokes thought. Amazing story of old town you have told here very wisely and brilliantly....10
Oops, that wasn't the picture I meant to grab for this poem. That was to go with part two, but it looks pretty good, so maybe I will leave it here for now.
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12/5/2025 8:32:48 PM # 1.0.0
I like this ballad - or at least the beginning of it. I think it needs part two to make it complete. I just can't figure out what Elivs has to do with it - yet.
Elvis is mentioned in part two, but part two is not finished yet (it only has three stanzas so far) . I have been busy with other things and have not had time to work on it. When it is finally finished, I may put the Elvis picture on part two and try to find a better one for part one.
I have now moved the picture of Elvis to Part 2, where it belongs.
I have now added part three, and it's probably still not finished. Part four may be added if my old brain can remember anything else to add.