Talk About Love Poem by Paige Nielsen

Talk About Love

Rating: 5.0


There's no way to be ready
for what life will give you.
They say love is blind,
but it has 20/20,
and it'll make you bleed.
Sex and blood; smoke and mirrors;
one gigantic mirage,
causing bewitched dreams and shrink appointments.
It'll hurt everyone with no discrimination:
geeks and goths and prom queens.
Making the first shoot up the school,
the second die on their bathroom floor,
and leaving the third pregnant, disgraced, alone.
It's relentless
scratching at your window, tapping at your door.
You can't resist; it'll wear you down.
A fistful of ammunition won't stave it off.
Epic or shorter than a sunset,
glimmering in its ethereality.
Sweet as candy or sharp as needles,
maybe both.
A lullaby to sleep or an anthem to awaken,
perilous lies and big fat weddings-
stupid 'bridezillas'.
No wonder half of all marriages end in divorce.
My parents, your parents, everybody.
Manic invasions into your heart,
butterflies in your stomach,
clouds in your mind.
How do we dare risk it?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joshua Lee 08 May 2009

Ah, the cynicism, I revel in it. My commendations, Paige.

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Angel Uchiyama 17 April 2009

It's very deep, dramatic and realistic, the exemples are touching. You catch the reader. Great ending.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

uv expressed it very well! amazing!

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Catina Crum 08 April 2009

'one gigantic mirage, causing bewitched dreams and shrink appointments. It'll hurt everyone with no discrimination: geeks and goths and prom queens. Making the first shoot up the school, the second die on their bathroom floor, and leaving the third pregnant, disgraced, alone. It's relentless scratching at your window, tapping at your door.' You need to write books. Nuff said. A page belongs in a book, Paige belongs in the world.

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Samantha Bunn 06 April 2009

Okay...I take that back. This one is my favorite. Very insightful and very true. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this one. Wow. It put a smile on my face, odd but I love the insight. Good job!

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