travel through the eyes
mind thus will accommodate
everything of life
under the cluster of heart
with sequence of love
A sequence of love through eyes and heart....top marks
WOw: under the cluster of heart with sequence of love...What a wonderful lines filled with images.
Totally Top tuning Tanka so tremendously beautiful while voting this 5 Stars full on Top! Truly Beautiful!
Every sequence of love is painted in the rays of heart's emotion and love is the power to motivate each perception. Your poem is very interesting one definitely.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderful love story in tanka format. Niche.