unfolding clouds
reveal a patch of
robin's egg blue
streaming sunlight sparkles
in tiny rainbow droplets
Using 31 syllables in all and giving a complete picture of... Oh yes I see a blessed sky
Wow a beautifully descriptive tanka. Reminds me of the birds eggs I used to see in our backyard years back. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful Tanka. A pleasure to read and visualize the blessed day.