john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 4,686 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

Tanka - Camelia, Charles - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Camelia, Charles
behind their smiles
Diana's tears
the marriage that
became too crowded

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  • (3/29/2005 1:26:00 PM)

    I agree with Kenny Boy. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/29/2005 12:14:00 PM)

    excellent exhibit great talent in so few words.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 29, 2005

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