Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 21,586 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Tanka: Journey - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

On the road

first leaf of Autumn

turning, turning, turning

as if

it had somewhere to go

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn, journey

Form: Tanka


Comments about Tanka: Journey by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • C Faustino (3/19/2019 9:20:00 AM)

    I love the first line's profound association on the autumn leaf's aimless journey. Great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (1/10/2019 11:06:00 AM)

    what a beautiful poem! personified imagery
    wonderful!
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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (12/29/2018 12:51:00 AM)

    Sorry it took me so long to respond- had eyesight pronlems (Report)Reply

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (12/29/2018 12:46:00 AM)

    This has talent written all over it and through it! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (12/29/2018 12:43:00 AM)

    Oh! ! ! I like this very very much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Captain CurCaptain Cur (9/18/2018 9:38:00 AM)

    The journey of that first colorful leaf has found a home in the lines of this reflective poem. (Report)Reply

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  • jgasreltibbetts@aol.com (9/8/2018 1:18:00 PM)

    Love it -as Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. I can see the poem in action. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 8, 2018



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