Tanka: Journey Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Tanka: Journey

Rating: 5.0


On the road

first leaf of Autumn

turning, turning, turning

as if

it had somewhere to go

Saturday, September 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
jgasreltibbetts@aol.com 08 September 2018

Love it -as Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. I can see the poem in action.

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Captain Cur 18 September 2018

The journey of that first colorful leaf has found a home in the lines of this reflective poem.

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C F 19 March 2019

I love the first line's profound association on the autumn leaf's aimless journey. Great poem.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 10 January 2019

what a beautiful poem! personified imagery wonderful!

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Susan Williams 29 December 2018

Sorry it took me so long to respond- had eyesight pronlems

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Susan Williams 29 December 2018

This has talent written all over it and through it! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 29 December 2018

Oh! ! ! I like this very very much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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