Tanka ~ Renew Our Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Renew Our Love

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when brown grass turns green
and nature rejoice in spring
and the flowers bloom
Let us renew our lost love
before the return of heat

Thursday, March 30, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: love lost,affinity and love
Deepak S S 30 March 2023

I salute your efforts here to bring such a Tanka, this is very pertinent, keeping in mind today's busy life and strain relationship.

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M. Asim Nehal 01 April 2023

Thank u so much Deepak, your insightful comment and analysis of each line is equally wonderful.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 April 2023

A passionate plea for the rebirth of love! I guess love always has a capacity to shape and reshape!

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M. Asim Nehal 01 April 2023

Well said, Thanks much for your comment. Ramzan Kareem.

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Sandra Feldman 31 March 2023

A worthy plea. Almost everything revives in Spring! *********

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M. Asim Nehal 01 April 2023

Very true, Thanks much Sandra.

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Juhaina Tumlu 31 March 2023

Fabulous Tanka, beauty of it is, short yet meaningful.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 March 2023

You renew my faith of Spring

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M. Asim Nehal 01 April 2023

Thanks much LeeAnn.

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Anjandev Roy 31 March 2023

Just magnificent......

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