Tears Of A Rose Poem by Patricia Gale

Tears Of A Rose

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Today I seen a rose shed delicate tears
Crystal droplets falling from the petals
Shimmering against the sun light
Rainbows color grace the glow, beauty with sadness
Falling, slowly sliding down to the thorns
Where no one see’s and no one knows
Disappearing into the earth
Silent tears never known
Captured through some eyes
With verse and remorse
The rose given in love
But withered through the years
Forgotten are the days of love
Leaving remnants of what was and will be no more
Where no one see’s and no one knows
The tears shed by the rose

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I agree, beautiful. I found the language and images very fresh, original. Peace, L&T

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Amanda Bailey 26 September 2007

this is very beautiful nice job

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Melvina Germain 20 June 2007

Absolutely beautiful Patricia, fantastic imagry depicting a feeling of peace. I like this very much.--Melvina--

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Amandeep Singh 21 May 2007

wow! what a poem! nice poetry A true friend is he or She, Who sees the first tear in our eyes, Holds the next and ensures, that the third dropp of tears, May not come out of our eyes.

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