Manonton Dalan

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Tell Me Am Dreaming - Poem by Manonton Dalan

clouds came down
to wash my face
forming puddle
beneath my feet
I cup my cheeks
to mask my cough
it felt warm
I never forget

I whisper let it be
pour on me; please
hurry; am tired
then light cuts sky
brilliant like smile
I was heard; i guess
then I should be fine

Topic(s) of this poem: dream

Comments about Tell Me Am Dreaming by Manonton Dalan

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/11/2015 8:27:00 PM)

    A lovely poem on rain indeed
    Loved reading it
    I invite you to read my poem Voice Of An Unaccomplished Soul (on Poet's Page)
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 11, 2015

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