Why cant I sleep when you don't text me
within a day?
Why cant I think about anything or anyone else?
Those 4 months might just be friendship for you,
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written well...a very good and poignant write..hallmarks of a good poem
A heart-rending poem, asking why you have to go through all this pain, such raw honesty and deep emotions, great write!
Takes me back to my youth (a very long time ago) . Really nice poem
Life is all about why sometimes we never find out till many years down the road WHY read my poem Lose to Win
I jive your poem two thumbs up! , mostly because I can easly relate to this poem of yours :)
Hi great poem Priya! To do a poem this efficient must have taken great emotions. I like this poem and give it an 8/10
A sad poignant reminder my own youth....when we step into the sweet shop looking for love, its always the brightest wrappers which attract the eye but we all have different tastes
A heart touching poem.........10