Thursday, October 25, 2012

Tell Me Why? Comments

Rating: 4.9

Why cant I sleep when you don't text me
within a day?
Why cant I think about anything or anyone else?
Those 4 months might just be friendship for you,
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Priya Kapoor
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Akhtar Jawad 29 November 2014

A heart touching poem.........10

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Payal Parande 27 October 2012

beautiful.........love it

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Allemagne Roßmann 26 October 2012

written well...a very good and poignant write..hallmarks of a good poem

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Hazel Durham 25 October 2012

A heart-rending poem, asking why you have to go through all this pain, such raw honesty and deep emotions, great write!

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Ernest Makuakua 25 October 2012

Wow awesome sweetheart. Keep them comming.

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Christopher Tye 25 October 2012

Takes me back to my youth (a very long time ago) . Really nice poem

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David Dale Kush 25 October 2012

Life is all about why sometimes we never find out till many years down the road WHY read my poem Lose to Win

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Sherry Painter 25 October 2012

I jive your poem two thumbs up! , mostly because I can easly relate to this poem of yours :)

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Titi Dale 25 October 2012

Hi great poem Priya! To do a poem this efficient must have taken great emotions. I like this poem and give it an 8/10

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Karen Sinclair 25 October 2012

A sad poignant reminder my own youth....when we step into the sweet shop looking for love, its always the brightest wrappers which attract the eye but we all have different tastes

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