Ten Out Of Ten Poem by Tia Maria

Ten Out Of Ten

Rating: 5.0


It had taken a while
For time to heal
And then one day
She started to feel

He said no regrets
And she agreed
With no demands
He filled a need

And sure enough
It came to an end
But ten out of ten
For trying my friend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 07 February 2009

you can't fault anyone for trying....I like this write, it's open and clear....nice work

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 February 2009

We most live life with no regrets...10 out of 10

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Fay Slimm 07 February 2009

Hhhmmm - - am asking the same question as Chris. here my lovely Tia ! ! - - - Fay with another 10...xx

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Kris Smith 07 February 2009

TENtative vote for has the story ended ? Chris

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Tom Balch 07 February 2009

Another ten for a great piece, Tom

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