Tia Maria

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A Fairy Tale - Poem by Tia Maria

Naked save for her delicate butterfly wings
She lays on a toadstool as mother nature sings
A posy of wild flowers held up to her nose
Long pixie slippers curl over her toes

A golden dragonfly hovers curiously above
Illuminating an aura of an enchanting love
The caterpillar arches her perfectly painted form
for the handsome snail with a hope so forlorn

Two magic mushrooms in wizard shaped hats
Three ladybugs chat upon their grassy mats
Time passes slowly in this moment just for me
As I gaze happily into my painted fantasy


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  • (10/24/2009 11:47:00 PM)

    Your words take me to the world of fantasy and the result I feel relax.10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/21/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    A posy of wild flowers held up to her nose
    Long pixie slippers curl over her toes

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (5/21/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    It is indeed a fairy tale. VIvidly painted in my mind as i read along with it. Thank you for sharing :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/15/2008 9:55:00 AM)

    a wonder trip through the rabbit hole, beautifully painted with resonant imagery (Report)Reply

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  • (12/14/2008 7:06:00 AM)

    you painted a miraculous fantasy world for Tinkerbel to play in.., T, i love it! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/13/2008 2:03:00 PM)

    I was intrigued with your name. Why Tia Maria! have you relatives in Brazil or Portugal? Wonderful poem! Congratulations (Report)Reply

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  • (12/1/2008 6:41:00 PM)

    An enchanting poem Tia! ! Splendid imagery, a pleasure to read indeed! ! *10*! !
    Best wishes!
    Friend Thad
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  • Adeline Foster (10/30/2008 5:31:00 PM)

    A lovely poem, Tia. I believed that Alice in wonderland thought. I wrote one once called 'Sunlight's World' but it was not as glittering whimsical. I shall have to look it up.
    Adeline
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/10/2008 4:58:00 AM)

    'Time passes slowly in this moment just for me
    As I gaze happily into my painted fantasy'

    A lovely poem with nice imagery.
    10+
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  • (10/3/2008 1:35:00 PM)

    awesome imagery..i felt like i was either tripping on mushrooms or reading alice in wonderland haha EXCELLENT 10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • (10/2/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    splendid visual you painted for me Tia it brightened my day (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2008 9:02:00 AM)

    words painted into fantasy...

    :)
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  • (9/21/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    I just love your Fairy Tale, mystical and magical creatures of light. It glitters with Fairy Dust.....10 (Report)Reply

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  • (9/19/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    Poems like this make me smile. I love the magical fantasy world :) I'm no good at writing about it so I will enjoy it through you. This was amazing, the flow and rhyme was good but your imagery was excellent.You're a poetic artist and I really enjoy your paintings that I read :) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/19/2008 3:31:00 AM)

    Well you said it was Unusual Tia, but in a good way butterflys touching lips, I feel A poem coming on..lol Andy 10 (Report)Reply

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  • David Threadgold (9/19/2008 2:07:00 AM)

    Hi Tia. Wonderful imagination a nice story in rhyme.10 Regards Dave T (Report)Reply

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  • David Threadgold (9/19/2008 2:06:00 AM)

    Hi Tia. Wonderful imagination a nice story in rhyme.10 Regards Dave T (Report)Reply

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  • (9/19/2008 1:55:00 AM)

    Beautifully written and a good place to be top marks 10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 19, 2008



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