That which
keeps
a rope
taut
rips a people
apart...
High imaginative poem. The poem is in concise but meaning is vast. It has been wisely penned. Two words -'taut' and 'rip' make the poem abyss. Many thanks dear Lemon, for posting such a gem. Full vote.
hope that rope is strong enough. otherwise as you said... so tension is good for connection! ! or it is not! ! we should check and repair to avoid erosion. so many meanings and dimensions of linking and loosing, I am thinking and reading after reading this beautiful piece of art.
Thank you so much, Muhammad. Yes, it is in the nature of that tension to bring the good and the bad. Let us hope we are able to recognize the differences and the nuances.
Clever poem, the word tension... And u described in poetic way Of how tension break a strong connection, and title i never feel how my emotion can truly define it best in words till you say it here.. You are one of talented poet with sharp mind/ thoughts. Enjoyed this much dear
this poem makes me want to see my therapistS! ! ! tension: it can do as you say. i like the proper English and the... to MyPoemList bri :)
This is so true....! It cannot be better put in such few words! Tension is like a rope strangulating most of the humans now! As years go, tension mounts!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes that is tension which keeps a rope taut and rips a people apart. So nicely presented. Beautiful. Thank u dear M.J for posting this.