Testing Bench Poem by Varsha M

Testing Bench

Rating: 5.0


A twist on time belt
Pulled them apart
Future husband turning back
Future wife with empty sack.

Life was cruel, everyone said
Little they knew it was test, lead
On upheavals so great
Tears tore them apart
Fears sore them like dust
But little they knew it made them mature
To handle it in their best understanding they gather
Reaping miracle as the run their race
Fathoming every jeopardy meant to be severe.

Hut of thatch is prescious
Down to earth are love rules
A complementary match
Always have miraculous catch.

Hut of thatch is not the problem
The way you treat your wife groom.

Hut of thatch is not the problem
Heart of theft is the program
When beau crafts a plot to drain out
Lying that he loves you like a nut
Thats why courtship takes years
To have lifetime without tears
Live in harmony in the hut of thatch
Rid your home of a heart of theft.

Thief often disguise like wise
Clothed in words like honey taste
But the real color often reflect
Love fathoms even impossible test
Shimmer of wealth fade under sun
As love wishes it's roots to deepen
Purifying all under fire.

Contributions by Bro Deluke M and myself.

Testing Bench
Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: calm,family,home,house,test,understanding
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The conception of these lines were from the lines change dealt in time now sow from poem hut of thatch by Deluke M. The description start awesome but I wished a different ending and in continuation of that poem I framed these line. Life's events can make us mature over time if we have good attitude.
The idea on image was shared by one of my PH friend Sharad Bhatia. I liked it and I was thinking to pen one poem on this. I think this picture justifies the poem best.
Second last stanza is written by Deluke M as comments and it sounds meaningful so I entered it here with little shuffle. And then last stanza too added by me.
Photo courtesy ID 65535526 © Ivaylo Sarayski on dreamstime.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 10 September 2020

Life can be cruel, and it can seem like that it is an endless road of dead ends, and indifference with very little to show, but its a wonderful journey. A beautiful and heartfelt poem with a deeply sincere message, the test of humanity is in your words.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2020

A well composed poem. Truly exceptional...10++++++

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Suresh Kumar Ek 09 September 2020

attitude makes everything

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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 September 2020

Thats true. With love and understanding they can live in a hut of thatch until their situation improves but if a relationship is based on wants it breaks down at the earliest sign of trouble. Thanks sis. Hut of thatch is not the problem Heart of theft is the program When lover plans to grab and go Lying that he loves you so so Thats why courtship takes years To have lifetime without tears Live in harmony in the hut of thatch Rid your home of a heart of theft

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Sharad Bhatia 09 September 2020

Really beautiful and admirable poem Thank you so much that you wrote a beautiful composition from my views.

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