thank u! thank u!
never gona believe what I say
Alas! it came out of my mind today
I was faked by u.
I thought u were my friend
Who shares with my every moment of my life
But I found that all of this was just a pretend
But u won't stop me&my way I'll drive.
My heart never concealed any bad feelings
Towards u, but it had a doubt
About your love 2 it&with weepings
I say ''I won't regret my saying aloud''.
I was shocked from what I 've seen
Don't u remember 2 u what I've been
I've been more than your breathe, when u were in a worry
&my pride I crash&say I'm sorry.
I didn't see the poison in your river
I was drinking but disgusted from being poisonous
But I won't do it again, never ever!
2 drink from a river before checking it's pureness.
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every one feels terrible when he faces a truth like confessing that your lover is a betrayal, what do u think? send your opinion after the comment, please.
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The person must be careful, specially in this era....the most thing that I hate is the'Betrayal'..because it is really painful.....nice poem..keep it up..Merna
thought u were my friend Who shares with my every moment of my life But I found that all of this was just a pretend..it is indeed good poem.....itiwas not love ut pretent......i love it....10 read mine thank you...miss i miss u
betrayal is a sign of an inside grudge which finishes all the time by tragedy! ! ! surely, the criminal hearts are the cause of this disease... betrayal is a sign of weakness! ! ! interesting poem! ! ! nice topic! ! ! keep it up...
perfect zeinab as usual..great work keep it up betrayal is painful, it hurts deeply..I don't know why I remembered Blake's Poision tree while reading your poem may be because death is the right end of betrayal...Thank You zeinab for your poem.I truly Love you and love your poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a romantic poem is this one too..means you write very romantic way..whic great.. liked it very much...10+++++++++