Night closed my windows and
The sky became a crystal house
The crystal windows glowed
The moon
shown through them
through the whole house of crystal
A single star beamed down
its crystal cable
and drew a plough through the earth
unearthing bodies clasped together
couples embracing
around the earth
They clung together everywhere
emitting small cries
that did not reach the stars
The crystal earth turned
and the bodies with it
And the sky did not turn
nor the stars with it
The stars remained fixed
each with its crystal cable
beamed to earth
each attached to the immense plough
furrowing our lives
House of crystal! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Clever use of imagery. Enjoyed the flow and concept. Thanks for sharing.
A poem of an epic proportion, Lawrence...... Congrats for being selected for the second time......
Beautiful poem A single star beamed downits crystal cableand drew a plough through the earth
The awesome flight of imagery is simply fantastic. A wonderful poem, a pleasure to read.
'The stars remained fixed each with its crystal cable beamed to earth each attached to the immense plough furrowing our lives' - the poem ends so beautifully!
The crystal earth turned and the bodies with it, supercilious
Outstanding poem. Poem full of imageries and fine flowing. Sky's the limit, nothing can stop reaching above it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lawrence, such a great write....congrats for being picked... a huge 10+++