That Sudden Shake....! Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

That Sudden Shake....!

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there was all of a sudden
the evening breeze,
I started to dance and waving
like the elegant trees

no one in my surrounds
I keep dancing all round and round,
in my translucent loveliest gown
all so lifting up,
but my heart keeps falling down,

a sudden shake
make me awake

ah, I was dreaming all night round,
sweetest dreams
as it seems....

Tuesday, August 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a sudden shake
make me awake

ah, I was dreaming all night round,
sweetest dreams
as it seems....


Thank you so much for reading

and for your precious comments,

© Sylvia Frances Chan
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Tuesday 11 Aufust 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 11 August 2020

A sudden shake is all it takes to make you awake. Be glad it wasn't an earthquake!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2020

Sometimes sweet dreams motivate mind with greater force. But sudden shake brings break here and you wake up and see another reality around. Evening breeze waves towards elegant trees. You still sing and dance with greater joy. This poem is very brilliantly penned with much beauty...10

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