The Benighted Asylum Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Benighted Asylum

Rating: 5.0


I flapped my arms like a flamingo.
But I realized and found.
There are no wing feathers like a fledged?
My dear benefactor!
Why did you fling me into this vast sky to flee in vain?
Not giving me an address or an addressee?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 29 June 2006

Poignant, fatalistic, and somehow rather touching. An original mind is definately at work here. Warm regards, Sandra

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David Gerardino 28 June 2006

flexible soul, GREAT LINE...........

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gone gone 28 June 2006

Nimal......beautiful and wryly loving....wondering and chuckling.....how well they blend...... Love, D..

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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