The Best Defete Of All Poem by Bonnie Collins

The Best Defete Of All

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Writting the defete, was easy as it
potrayed the image of what I perceived
as my fathers final hours

Why is it so difficult to compose a tribute
so delicate for you mom

Why is it difficult to open that part and
give it life so I can too, finally put this
into perspective

If I never do a defete in your honor
please understand from above for
reasons only you and I can share
are maybe the best defete of all..........


Dedicated to my mother in
her final journey............

Monday, July 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: fathers,mom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 12 September 2008

Words are very powerful sometimes they make us cry And the urology that's given, we later wonder why? I wrote it with such feeling, but I was in distress I've thought about it now Mom, I wish i could redress!

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Andrew Blakemore 31 July 2008

I truly feel for you Bonnie. This is a wonderful tribute from one special lady to another. Love, Andrew x

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James B. Earley 27 July 2008

We lose a loved one...in death, only in the physical sense. Spiritually....they remain very much alive....sanctuaried...safely within the memory. Be well! .........

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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