The Big Secret Poem by Masharia kanyari

The Big Secret

Rating: 4.1

Allow me to share something you shouldn't know,
I am really building myself a cottage,
Its just that I lay each brick with so much purpose,
as I craft the comouflage to pretend its a castle,
so when my time comes to die I shall be proud,
Embrace the tomb I shall have built for myself,
A place my spirit can visit and watch my body decompose...

Monday, September 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
Chinedu Dike 28 January 2017

Dust to dust is a must. An insightful piece, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Charity Nduhiu 23 September 2015

Kanyari you are so brave to talk about death though it will come one day. Its good to be prepared spiritually. Thanks for your honesty

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Macharia Kanyari 25 September 2015

Thank you Charity, I appreciate this.

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Kinyua Karanja 23 September 2015

Every new day is a step toward the grave and so it's always necessary to be aware and prepared to face the fate, Your poem is so moving and arouses alertness. Good work.

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Macharia Kanyari 25 September 2015

You have a keen sense of perception there Karanja. Thank you sir!

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Kelly Kurt 21 September 2015

A poignant poem, Masharia. Thanks

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Macharia Kanyari 25 September 2015

Thank you too sir

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