The Bird Hide Poem by Margaret O Driscoll

The Bird Hide

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A bird hide fashioned in willow
With a high wooden bench to sit on
A long discreet viewing slit
A moorhen appears, then it's gone

A wagtail flies by the hide
Then rests awhile on a rail
Just a few feet from me
Restlessly bobbing it's tail

Thursday, September 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greg Davidson 04 September 2016

Images so clear, I too enjoy watching birds... and reading your verse

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Margaret O Driscoll 06 September 2016

Delighted you like this...glad you enjoy watching birds too!

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Pamela Sinicrope 01 September 2016

Nice choice of words and imagery. Your title captured me and I clicked to read this poem. The arrangement of your words flows so nicely and I can see what you're describing here. Beautiful and soothing.

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Margaret O Driscoll 01 September 2016

Thanks so much Pamela, so glad that you can share the memory with me and that you enjoyed it so much! The willow bird hide was a work of art totally blending in with the surrounding area by a small lake, I wished I could have stayed in it longer! !

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